I don’t see any flaws in that. I just fall into the picture. Love it.
me too me too.
Granted, it is a tough angle to draw; her face is turned the right almost in profile, while her shoulders are at 45° to the artist, tilted left a bit, with her legs and hips probably lined up with her face. Which means she’s twisting the left to do her hair. Those kinds of positions usually call for some foreshortening.
I know Art and that’s not Art. Art works down at the bowling alley.